A Dimension of Time
The time has come
His hand caresses her check
She squeezes his other hand
Time is slowing
The heads getting closer
Eyes close
Time is about to stand still
They soon will touch
One thinks, “Finally”
The time is now
Their lips lightly touch
The clock freezes with lips in place
Time is this moment
The lips stay together
Time is an instance
He releases to lightly return
She smiles in her heart
Time is steady
He is her sanctuary
She is his muse
Time ticks
He kisses her upper lip
She – his lower
Time is a tempo
He is slow
She is lost
Time beats
Lips nibble
They immerse
Time is an interval
His tongue engages lightly
She sighs
Time is a continuum
He is delicate
She is his delicacy
Time is a spell
His
Hers
Time is a span
His pace is steady
She hastens
Time is a point on a span
He succumbs
She leads
Time is theirs
Time becomes the past
Their time returns
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NOTE: Although some of described certain past posts as poetic, I’ve never posted a poem – so this is the first! Then again, it may not even be a poem – and if it is, I have no clue about its type or style. Nonetheless, thank you Fiery @ Silently Smouldering Words for writing a poem with a line that inspired me to write this.
Love this, Frank. You have excelled yourself.
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Sylvia,
Thank you. Not sure I knew what I was doing, so I just tried to develop some sort of pattern.
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You did good. 👏🏻
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🙂
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Well done Frank – that’s a sexy piece of writing, just like a tango 🙂
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Pauline,
Thank you … now relating this to a tango surprised me – but I see what you mean. 🙂
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I’m surprised you hadn’t had a dance in mind as you wrote this – it seems to fit……..
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I like your thoughts!
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There is a dance to this–the back and forth, the leading and following. . .
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Merril,
I took me a while to see it as a dance, but I finally get it … and your description is perfect.
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Exactly!
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🙂
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I thought of a tango too. Very sensual writing.
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If that’s your first poem, holy crap, I can’t imagine your future ones! You knocked that one out of the park! I love poetry & you definitely put a delightful, delicious yet fragile and tender theme to it. Great job!!!!
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Amanda,
Thank you. I like you adjectives … delightful, delicious, fragile, tender … perfect! As for future ones, I have to laugh because this is so outside the box for me. Then again, time will tell.
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You’re so talented!! I’m answering as many comments that fell through the cracks. I apologize deeply for missing any of your comments!
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No problem … stuff happens.
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Well, Frank, you have completely surprised me! I am so impressed with your skill in composition, and really so impressed with the beauty and sensitivity. Well done! I think poetry is more your thing than perhaps you knew. 🙂 Or maybe I just need to say more than WE knew!
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Debra,
You’ve been here a long time, so you know this is outside-the-box for me, so I greatly appreciate your kind words. I focused on a pace with time as a concept woven throughout – plus, I stayed away from rhyming!
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This beautifully passionate poem could only be born in the heart of a true poet. Your muse has whispered in your ear Frank.
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Holly,
Knowing you love writing poetry, I was anxious to see your thoughts. You are too kind – so thank you!
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Your poetry is lovely Frank. I was very moved by this beautiful poem. The muse whispered something in your ear and said “pass it on” , I hope this is just the beginning.
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I don’t know. As you know, I’m more of a content guy, but I have dabbled in fiction. But I won’t discount another one. Thanks for the encouragement!!!
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One must use the right side of the brain.
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Good advice.
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I was just reading about the difference in feminine and masculine creativity, apparently it has to do with emotions and logic . I do hope we will read more poetry from you.
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A wonderful evocative poem–and I like the dance thread throughout. Thanks for sharing.
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Patti,
Thank you. So interesting that you mention the dance thread. I had to laugh because not only are you the second person to mention it here, my brain went to a limited view of dance – but hey – I now see what you mean!
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Exactly so nice and poem! And also there is a musical dance in this one, Thank you dear Frank, Love, nia
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Nia,
Ah yes – the dance between two people with their own music. 🙂 Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this.
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Well… what to say???
Before I gush a lot of thanks at you I’ll say a few things, so settle in!
This IS a poem. Of course it is. I am not one to ‘name’ types of poetry as I find it unnecessary but if anything this is free verse. You did it wonderfully. No one would know that this is your first venture into poetry. It reads like you’ve been doing this for a while.
And it is so soft and sensual…very engaging; my eyes were racing to the next line and the next…
The concept of time throughout and the pacing were perfect with your subject of a tender kiss between two, I would call them soulmates.
Two parts stood out for me:
“He is her sanctuary
She is his Muse.”
I loved that part.
And then this:
“He is delicate
She is his delicacy.”
Amazing. Such inspired lines, Frank. Honestly.
I am very impressed and needless to say you must write more.
Thank you so so much for your mention of me and I am over the moon that you say a little line of mine inspired this. Very humbling and makes me smile. As you can see from comments above me, your readers are thrilled and so they should be.
This was a pleasure to read.
I agree…felt like a sensual dance.
Many hugs
💚
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Fiery,
Outside of the comments I responded to last night, I haven’t seen them yet this morning because I wanted to read yours first.
Thanks for the kind words. So odd that it just came together so quickly after whatever line I read of yours. I wanted to keep each phrase short with a concept of time woven in after each he/she moment.
Actually considered lengthening it – but then I noticed the phrases were longer – so I scrapped the idea.
Thanks for letting me know your favorite lines. Yes, those are two of my favorites as well. Again, thanks for the inspiration.
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Aw..my pleasure Frank.
I meant every word of this.
You outdid yourself.
Make sure you keep writing and getting inspired
Xxx
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Thank you … so toast with a beer for me at the pub for lunch.
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Haha! How about I toast you with some apple juice from my living room instead?!
X
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I’ll take it! But hey – I had to tap into a London theme.
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Lol. That you did!!
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Frank–you know that I love things time-related. I like how you write something about time–then what happens with the couple, as time seems to slow and start. And time does seem to do that in those moments.
Of course, this is a poem! And a dance. 🙂
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Merril,
Thank you – and knowing how much you write poetry – your extra special to me. Even though one can easily focus on the couple, the time concept was so important to me during the writing because of exactly what you said. I probably worked on the time lines more than the encounter. The more I think about it, I like the thought that this is both a poem and a dance. 🙂
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This is definitely a poem! I love the way it looks and dances back and forth with the words and couple. Perhaps the tango influenced the beat! Well done!
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Jo,
Thank you for the kind words. I finally see the poem as a dance … and tango and bolero would fit the poem’s mood. Glad you liked it!
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A gorgeous and passionate piece of writing, Frank. Unbelieveable for a first poem.
Tender moments captured in time like a camera freezing their love, desire, and
mutual inspirations. Bravo.
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Drew,
So glad you saw this, and being that poetry is what you do, I take your praise to heart. Thank you!
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Yes, Frank, it is a poem and a very good one. Well done.
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John,
Coming from an author, I humbly accept your praise. Thank you!
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You don’t have to be too humble. Excellent work.
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This is a fine dance of words
swirling, pausing, with motion’s memory – just like time
Well done
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Mouse,
Thank you. One of the things I’ve enjoyed here is reading the comments about this poem. A few others (like yourself) used great adjectives. 🙂
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Cincy!
Who knew?
You blew me away with this one! What a fire you’ve penned here. Hopefully there is more to follow.
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Marc,
I was hoping you would see this as it is a bit different from my normal fare. (You beat Q here.) Glad you enjoyed this (and it surprised you) and thanks for the encouragement.
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I hope you do more of this. 🙂
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Time will tell – no promises – After all, it took 11 years to get one poem posted.
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I hear you. When it happens, if it happens.
Having dabbled, my props to poets, really.
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I admit that the support for this here was wonderful – and others have encouraged.
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Well done! I think you’re on to something – writing poems to the pulse characteristics of a dance step.
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As I kept reading, I kept thinking something Daylight Saving Time related but after careful consideration, have decided not to snark up a well done and lovely post. 😊
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Monika,
The publishing of this post and timing with Daylight Savings Time is purely coincidental … and glad you enjoyed my little poem.
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Then I’m even more grateful not to have snarked anything. 😊
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AAA to you aFrank. I thought this was such a lyrical poem. And, it’s a poem. What is a poem anyway? To me it’s an expression of what is in our heart and mind. Your words express a longing for the two people to savor the moment their totally present in with each other. Bravo 👏 thanks for sending me back to read this very well written poem.
Isadora 😎
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Isadora,
Thank you for the kind words, support, and coming back. I had a feeling you would like it. 🙂
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👍 😎
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This is simply beautiful.
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Yeah… I like this! Very cool, Frank!
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Dearest Frank,
My most humble apologies on arriving so late to this beautiful poetic post. All that teasing I did with you and then I didn’t come back to it! D’oh!
So, that said, this was beautifully sensual and your concept of time wove its way throughout giving it a most sensual rhythmic movement to is. As a few have said, it was definitely a dance.
Lookit you. First you try to tell us you don’t do fiction, then you say you don’t do poetry.
You lie.
Lotsa belated love,
Dale
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Dale,
For me, you seeing this late is better than not seeing it at all. With this one, I see myself as lucky – but I acknowledge that it worked. Of the two parts of this poem, I worked on the time lines more than the other.
Bottom line – thanks for the kind words and encouragement!
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I went away for a few days and I was catching up and when I saw your post for your blog break did a face palm and went to get this!
You did really well. When we allow things to go organically, it is surprising what we can accomplish!
Most welcome and very well-deserved.
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🙂 … and I mentioned you in the blog-break post!
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I am reading it, as we “speak”!
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